Sumi H. Inkblot

Hey Kiba, I'd like to read this but it's killing my eyes! If you could space it I would be happy to come back and give you a big critique. ...

Lol, yes guys...that's our politicians for ya. Go America....lol :*laughs*: Yeah, let him lead all of us in suing God! Because our team didn't win the football game. My country ...

These...people.... :*holds head in hands*: I got a "Stupid" headache just reading that....dude, it's coming in waves off the website...

Hmmmm....I like Nora a lot at this point. :) Mostly because she seems like an older, calmer version of me (I'm OFTW!!!), which is not only insanely cool but kinda ...

First of all, Guinevere needs to get to Camelot from Cameliard. I'm thinking that maybe Aubrey could come along to accompany her? Given the time period she would probably be ...

:*blows champagne cork over the edge of the forums*: ^_~

Hon, you've got a "On Top of Old Smokey/Spaghetti" rhythm going here, dipping occasionally into plain forced rhyming. That said, it's not a good thing . :lol: I notice that ...

Pretty....kind of....sad, angry...8/10

((Methinks we should let Jenna start, pie. ^_^))

Beautiful imagery. I didn't notice any grammar slip-ups, so no complaints there. ^_^ glaring down at me, entrancing me, surrounding me. Each of the distant pinpricks seems to be scrutinizing ...

I think of a (sorry, here >_>) homosexual guy coming out into the world. The Clockwork Kingdom

Heehee. ^_^ I love your poems, Goldie. "Monsters Under my Bed" and "Jam". I have absolutely nothing to add to the above, and this is turning into the horrid crit ...

Welcome to the YWS! ^_^ Sorry to say this right-off-the bat, but poems are usually posted in the poetry forums....0_o Haha, that sounded rather condescending, didn't it? ^_^ The base ...

first one: Ugh! Puns! :lol: Second: Ew! :*laughs*: 7/10

Welcome! Oh, darn, Meep beat me to the HP catch. :*pouts*: I'm Sumi. Nice to meet you, Katrina! :D PM me if you have any questions on the site. And ...